You are viewing a single comment's thread:
Absolutely it's a poem, I started to read your piece as a poem, but then it's prose mode took over. I'm glad you asked the question because it enabled me to take a closer look. I loved how your use of specific details, such as "papers were clutched" and "belongings were searched," grounded the scene in such a tangible reality, heightening the emotional impact. Excellent work that I believe a lot of us can relate to in our current dystopia.
I spent a lot of time on that bit, so thank you for that comment.