Cashmap

Moon Jasmine

(edited)

'Get up and clap' my Dad shouts, or rather, croaks, his mouth and throat dry with medication. He is diminutive, shrinking. I think in magic realist ways: he will be so small he will be buried in a matchbox. The rabbits will mourn him in the moonlit with songs of how they escaped his thumping dances on the back deck, flinging boots and stones toward them as they stole morsels of young plants and shat on his lawn. As much as they ran from his clap, they will think, he was still a man, and deserved to be missed at least a little.

Some weeks ago, my father spoke to the palliative care nurse with hesitant sentences as he fought both breath and mind. The drugs create spaces - the drawn out weeks until the relief of going, the drawn out sentences and the brain misfiring. He is dreaming but cannot articulate it. He is bone weak, bone tired, bone sick. We cannot rub his back - it hurts. Mum has put a wheat pack, warmed, on his side, where his lungs are tortured. The nurse listens. Suddenly, he stands, leaps toward the back door, flings it open - and there a large rabbit leaps and runs. We look at him in suprise. Sometimes the body does not listen to itself.

He worries about the jasmine, which he has trained like a flower dog to leap up the post of the back pergola near the pool. We've put a round of wire around it to stop both rabbits and possums - both pests, one native, one not. When more able bodied, he'd push possums from their tree top nests with long sticks, much to the horror of the neighbours. Now he has nothing but will. 'Get up! Chase the bastard!' he croaks, and we leap in ways we would never have leapt before. We can't, however, sustain this under moonlight, where the night creatures do not obey the rules set by my father.

)
Moon Jasmine - Image created on Canva

A jasmine has importance in an Australian garden. Whilst it's an import, it's as Australian as a summer barbecue. It grew to popularity in the '50's, when it became a climbing plant for garden trellises and fences and lush, fragrant plants crept into domestic landscapes. It's heady, cloying scent infused childhood summers with a perfume that we wanted to replicate in our adulthood - and hence, many of us still plant jasmine.

It's pink jasmine (Jasminum polyanthum) which we all love - it's fast growing, and has delicate pink tubular flowers and lush, evergreen foliage that last year round, covering unsightly fences and climbing up trellies. Orginally from China and Vietnam, we've adopted it as one of our own. It blooms in late winter to early spring and into summer, and it's fragrance is utterly enchanting, asking people to stop and wonder at the scent - a sensual, elegant climber you can't help fall in love with. Wow, we say, passing the neighbour's jasmine - we really must plant one.

We haven't, yet.

Instead, we watch my father's jasmine climb, knowing it'll climb and release scent long after he is gone, stretching away from the earth toward the sunlight and at night, the rabbit's moon.

This post was written in response to Hive Garden's weekly prompt - the theme this week is SCENTED. I chose to write more of a reflective piece, but you can write to any theme you like, so long as it's related to gardening and 'scented'!

With Love,

image.png

Are you on HIVE yet? Earn for writing! Referral link for FREE account here

0E-8 CASHMAP
4 comments

Your post is beautifully poignant, blending the tangible and the intangible in a way that speaks directly to the heart. The contrast between your father’s physical frailty and the persistence of life around him, particularly in the form of the jasmine, is deeply moving.

The jasmine, living on after he’s gone, feels like a profound metaphor for the lasting impact he’s had on the world and those around him. Thank you for sharing such an evocative piece <3

0E-8 CASHMAP
(edited)

Gosh, your analysis makes me feel like my writing is good or something so I really appreciate your comment! Sometimes it just flows without me thinking much about it and it's funny to read someone knowing exactly what I was trying to say without me really knowing what I was saying, if that makes sense!!! Anyway, I appreciate your thoughtful and attentive comment and appreciate YOU!!šŸ’– šŸ‡

And reading back, there's errors that annoy me, but I'm too tired to fix them now.

0E-8 CASHMAP

makes me feel like my writing is good or something

'Good' doesn't do justice to your writing. It's beautiful.

Anyway, I appreciate your thoughtful and attentive comment and appreciate YOU!!

Thank youā˜ŗļø

And reading back, there's errors that annoy me, but I'm too tired to fix them now

I was too sucked in to notice. Hehehehe

0E-8 CASHMAP

Beautiful.
There is Jasmine growing all along the road that I live on. It has such a comforting smell. Isn't amazing how much power the brain has over our bodies. Sending you a huge hug, as you go through this transition xxxxx

0E-8 CASHMAP

Oh yes there's a honeysuckle that reminds me of a trip to Queensland when I was nine!!!

0E-8 CASHMAP

The cover picture is beautiful

0E-8 CASHMAP

It's lovely but note the link that it's AI.

0E-8 CASHMAP

Wao, I imagined the whole scene chasing the rabbits, the jasmine over the fence and a dad who's run out of strength, energy, everything.... 🄺 There are scents in our garden that in one way or another will remain in our lives throughout the years. A hug @riverflows

0E-8 CASHMAP

Thanks so much for reading and commenting beautiful xxx

0E-8 CASHMAP